Bleak Midwinter

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Bleak Midwinter

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At least there was no snow, just wind. But the wind was more bitter than anything I could remember.

How appropriate, I thought, sourly, bending my head against it. Pulling the hood down low on my face and mourned the loss of my designer umbrella, now a tangled metal mess abandoned in a ditch five yards from my front door. I didn’t want to think about the damage the puddles would be doing to my boots. I should have just driven but I knew what a fuss she’d kick up about waste, not to mention the idea of drink-driving. I knew it wasn’t worth the fight, but why on earth was she so instant we meet at the Exchange? Could she not have just come to the house if she was that desperate to see me?

My cheeks stung with the chill. The puddles of orange street light looked blurred from my watering eyes and I cursed myself for not standing up to her, yet again. But then, I never could.

Did she have nothing better to do on Christmas Eve, seriously?

There wind lulled as I passed St. Nicholas’s and for a moment the echo of carols hung in the biting air. The windows of the little church were lit and there was fairy lights around the door. Voices rose and fell in unison and for the first time I could recollect it actually looked inviting, certainly more inviting than the pub across the road to which I was heading. As I crossed the road the wind picked up again, roaring in my ears and bringing a spatter of icy drops which managed to fly into my hood and trickle down inside my scarf.

The Exchange was all lit up and I knew it would be warm inside but somehow I still didn’t relish the idea of going in. There was a man huddled in the porch, blowing his cigarette smoke out into the wind and shivering. He gave me a dirty look as I passed, as if the smoking ban had been my idea.

It was warm but it also felt damp, stuffy. There were people laughing too loudly and the bar staff had the same Now That’s What I Call Christmas album playing that they had the last Christmas and the one before that.

I knew where she would be sitting without looking round so I went straight to the bar and ordered a white wine. Large. As I perched on a stool opposite her she gave me a very obvious up-and-down.

“Hello,” she greeted me politely, taking a sip of her small white wine.

“Carol,” I muttered, taking a large swallow of my own. “Well, I’m here.”

“To the point these days, aren’t you?”

I didn’t answer, knowing the argument that would follow. I took another mouthful, wincing at the cheer from the bar as the opening bars of Do They Know it’s Christmas inevitably blared from the speakers.

“Well,” she said, softening. “You have actually agreed to see me so I suppose there might be hope for you yet. How are you doing?”

“Very well. Very well indeed, in fact. Profits are up.”

“Yes I noticed that. No small achievement in a recession. So many companies in trouble and everything…”

“What’s do you mean by that?”

“Nothing at all.” She gave an easy shrug and I couldn’t help but admire the smooth movement of her slim shoulders. Her face was still bright and open, with just the slightest hint of steeliness in he glance that belied the iron will within. “You always had an eye for business. These times seem to suit you.”

She took another little sip, her wide, dark eyes never leaving mine. I didn’t need to acknowledge the criticism, it hung in the air around her like candle smoke.

“What’s that?” I said, gesturing at a heavy silver chain around her neck. She never used to run to extravagant jewellery. “How does that fit in with your anti-profit tack?

She fingered it idly, eyes still not leaving mine. “You gave it to me, don’t you remember?”

I shook my head, looked closer. It was very heavy chain links. Solid looking. Ugly. “No, I don’t.”

She shrugged again. “I thought it wasn’t to your usual taste. But then, you’ve changed since I knew you well.”

“Look,” I said, irritation reaching it’s peak. “Do you just want to spit it out? You’re obviously not keen on my company and to be perfectly honest the feeling is mutual so do you just want to say whatever it is you’ve got to say so I can go home?”

She didn’t answer for so long I looked up at her, expecting maybe to see her fighting back the tears I felt prickling in my own eyes. But her face was clear, her eyes steady. The heavy chain rose and fell with her breathing and she lifted her glass once more with those steady, long-fingered hands and took a measured sip. I winced again at loud laughter from the bar.

“Do you even remember why we used to come here?” she eventually asked.

“Quite frankly, no.”

The tiniest trace of a sad smile pulled at the edge of her mouth. “You used to enjoy it. We used to have a laugh, have a little drink, sing along with the songs. Some of the best times we had together was here at Christmas time.”

“I’ve got more important things to enjoy now.”

“Yes, your house is very nice, I’ve seen it. Do you live there alone?”

“You know I do.”

She nodded, looking away. She said the next words so quietly I almost missed them in the din, “A golden idol has replaced me. I just hope you’re happy in the life you have chosen.”

I opened my mouth to reply but no sound came out. She eventually lifted her eyes to mine again. She seemed suddenly very far away. In another rare lull in the chatter I heard my phone beeping in my pocket. She held my gaze calmly but I looked away, pulled my phone out of my pocket.

The text flashed across the screen. Mary wanted to meet me. Now. I felt a familiar rush of irritation. I thought I’d managed to end things with Mary. I thought she’d’ve realised by now we weren’t compatible. Obviously she wasn’t the sort to take a hint. I’d have to meet her and spell it out.

“Carol,” I started, looking up, but she’d gone.

Good riddance. I thought, ignoring the little patch of cold that had spread itself under my stomach at the realisation that it was probably the last time I would see her.

I had what I would say all planned out, but as soon as Mary saw me she wouldn’t let me get a word in edgeways.

“This way, over here. Wait until you see.”

There was a palpable buzz of excitement in the way she carried herself as she hurried me along. The exuberant part of her nature surfaced rarely but even that was too often. This whole set up was typical of her and the more I thought about it the more resolved I became.

My heart had sunk when I’d stepped out of the taxi into the town square where she’d insisted we meet and seen the village choir assembled with carol sheets under the lights of a large decorated tree that was swaying alarmingly in the wind. Despite the frigid air and the wet underfoot there was a crowd in hats and scarves gathered and chattering loudly over the weather. The choir launched into their first (out of tune) carol with nauseating gusto. There was a vendor with a portable heater full of mulled wine stood to one side and the spicy waft reached me and stirred my longing for my own bottle of red I had on the counter and my deep armchair in front of the wide screen telly.

Thankfully she dragged me past the singers into a more empty corner of the square and I thought for a moment that she did actually understand me better than I thought. But then I saw what it was that had spread the smile all over her face. There was a poster pinned to the notice board advertising a theatre company that had come to do a Christmas production in the play house. I felt a scowl weight down my brow.

“Oh come on, I thought you’d be pleased.” There was gravity back in her voice now.

“There’s a reason me and my nephew haven’t spoken in years, Mary.”

“Well there must be a reason for his company to be coming here. He must want to see you.”

“I doubt he even knows I live here.”

“But look at this: all the proceeds are going to charity. It’s a fundraiser for Robert’s little boy. They want to get him a motorised wheelchair.”

“Robert should be more careful with his money, then his family wouldn’t need charity.”

“Yes, well as generous as I’m sure you are with his wage, don’t you think a little extra couldn’t do any harm? Think of the boy.”

“Robert’s wage is ample, thank you very much,” I said bristling. “Generous, even, I would say, especially as I don’t completely utilise his skills. He could work more hours if he were determined.”

“With all those children at home? How’s his wife supposed to work if she’s in with the children all day every day?”

“Well – ”

“So you won’t come and see it with me?” She crossed her arms, using her more usual voice, the voice she used on rival businessmen. “The last night is tonight.”

I snorted and turned to leave. “I’m busy.”

“Is that so? Doing what?”

I turned back and raised my voice over the wind and bad carols. “Doing anything else but.”

“It’s Christmas Eve,” she insisted. “Is this not the time more than any other to spend with your family? And helping other people?”

“Let me keep Christmas in my own way, please.”

“Keep it?” she snapped. “You don’t keep it.”

“Let me leave it alone then.”

I thought she’d snap at that but she just stood and surveyed me calmly. Though I was roiling at the pity I could see in her dark eyes, I was struck again at by how attractive she could be. I saw again how she looked something like Carol. Older, more refined and with better clothes, but there was similarities in the determination of her dark eyes and in the confident way she held her shoulders. She also tended to temper determination with mercy and, whilst I had to admit this could be an attractive quality, it just wasn’t working in the long term, either on a personal or a professional basis.

“Look, Mary,” I said, looking her in the eye and dredging up the well-practised speech. But she cut me off.

“You’re running out of chances, you know.” She didn’t explain what she meant and I didn’t ask. She turned away just as snow started whirling down in the wind. The clock on the village hall struck eight and I watched her walk away through the gusting snow, across the cobbles until she disappeared into the dark and the sound of her smart boots was swallowed by the wind and singing.

I told myself I couldn’t care less if I never saw Carol or Mary again after tonight and ignored the cold that swilled inside me at this thought. Instead I forced myself to think of my warm living room and the fully stocked wine rack. However, the pleasantness conjured by this thought immediately evaporated when I pulled out my phone to call a taxi to discover the battery was flat. My spare was at home in my briefcase.

Cursing fluently I checked my purse but of course had no change for the payphone, that was even assuming the payphones on the square were still connected. I turned my collar up, tightened my scarf and, hunching my shoulders, set off back across the square, past the warbling singers and chattering people and into the darkened side streets. The noise and the light faded until all I could here was the gusting of my breath and the slushing of my Armani boots in the gathering snow and all I could see was the fat flakes swirling in the dark air with mist from my mouth. The streets were remarkably quiet. All the shop and house windows were dark and I assumed everyone must be in the square or the Exchange.

As I carried on that the air got darker and colder, the snow thicker. In disgust I turned off the main pavement and through a gate in the hedge around St. Nicholas’s to duck around the back of the church and across the field to my house, a route darker and muddier but quicker. The church windows were black now, the voices silent. The only light was what spilled through the trees from the street lamps along the main road. Shadows nestled in hummocks of snow, clustered at in the roots of the yews and gathered themselves to the gravestones like masses of dark moss. I picked my way through carefully after the first stumble. My boots crunched but the sound was swallowed in the vast silence. I ducked my head down lower and pressed on.

I was within sight of the gate when I became aware that mine was no the only breathing I could hear. Every instinct I had told me to speed up get out but instead I paused, trying to convince myself I imagined the sound. It worked until I heard it again, a rattling, suffering breath, shuddering somewhere from the shadows ahead. I tried to move my feet but couldn’t. As the sound continued I made out a shape. It was so twisted and bent I had thought it was part of the tree it was stood under. I couldn’t move forward so I tried to move back but my feet felt like they were frozen to the icy grass.

Whatever it was moved. It took a careful step forward and then another. A slight breeze creaked in the branches above me and bit at my ears and cheeks. The clouds shifted and the cold light of the moon flooded the graveyard.

I swallowed a yell. The old woman stared at me calmly, though her breath rattled in and out in a laboured manner. The shadows from strands of loose hair accentuated the deep lines in her face. But out of the web of wrinkles her eyes were bright, but cold. She was bent low over a stick, her body moving stiffly. I felt control of my limbs return as she just stood there regarding me steadily and I felt anger flare at having been startled. But still something about her gaze still fixated me. Something familiar.

“Can I help you?” I asked with as much brusqueness as I could muster. She didn’t move apart from her eyes that looked me up and down and then past me, over my shoulder with a heavy glance. Her breathing rasped on in the silence. “Why are you out here alone?” I pressed, glancing around the snow covered graves. She looked back at me with something like pity in her eyes and slowly shook her head. I felt frustration mounting again, over the cold that continued to gather beneath my ribs.

“Well, if you’ll excuse me, I must go. I suggest you get home to your family.”

“I have none.” Her voice creaked like the branches above me, as though she used it little.

“I’m sorry.”

“Don’t be,” she said, in a surprisingly firm voice. “My circumstances are of my own making.”

I lifted my eyes again and she was still staring at me. The wind teased at the strands around her face and mine. The wet from the snow chilled against my calves and a shiver run over my skin. Her eyes finally slid from mine and focussed on a spot over my shoulder again. Reluctantly, I turned. I knew it must have been a trick of the moonlight and the snow but one grave was illuminated so brightly that it gave the impression of not having been there a minute ago. The flat stone was freshly cut judging by the sharpness of the edges, making the shadows look keen as razors. A neat blanket of snow was gathering on its surface, even and crisp, slight indentations indicating the engravings.

“Not long until my turn,” she said. “I hope there will be flowers laid for me, though.”

I turned back to her, but she was gone. I rubbed my eyes but she was nowhere in sight and no tracks in the snow. I shook my head, thinking I needed my house, needed my bed, a fire to warm my skin and wine to warm my insides. I was obviously more tired than I thought. I wanted to lock all the doors, close all the curtains, disconnect the phone and spend the night and day sheltered with myself. With a pang I realised that being alone with my thoughts was not as welcome a prospect anymore as it had been even two hours ago.

The snow had stopped falling and once again the air around me was still and silent. No breathing shadows. No carols on the wind. I was utterly alone.

Turning back to the naked grave was something I did before I even comprehended what I was doing. The surface was almost blinding with reflected moonlight. I told myself to dismiss my silly thoughts. I was obviously tired and frustrated with everything that had been said that night and my brain was playing tricks on me. If I just knelt and wiped the snow from the stone, the name would wash away all worries. I took a hesitant step closer, boot crunching and blood pumping in my ears. “Do it,” I heard myself in a voice that sounded unfamiliar in the dead air. “Just do it. It’ll be a Smith or a Jones from here about. One of those from the old folks home that couldn’t live through another winter. Then you can go home and go to sleep and this night will finally be over.”

The snow was wet and cold on my knees and my heart thudded against my ribs. I put out my gloved hand, saw it hovering over the white snow like a shadow. I saw it trembling, cursed myself and angrily shoved the snow away.

CAROL MARY DICKENS

I covered my face with my hands, icy snow pressed against my cheeks and eyes. I dug my knuckles so deep into my offending eyes that it hurt and I saw spots. I felt hot tears mingling with the melting snow against my skin. My breath caught in retching sobs and I couldn’t stop the tide of despair that washed over me, bringing with it ghosts of feelings I had long since thought buried: shame, fear, loneliness. And all my doing. The old lady was right, if there were no flowers on my grave at Christmas Eve when the time came it would be no one’s doing but my own.

I pulled my hands away, the freezing air biting at the hot tear tracks. I blinked the blurriness away and looked down at the empty grass in front of me, the snow disturbed by scrapings and hand prints. The stone was gone. I blinked again but the tears on my face and the snow in my eyelashes and hair were still there and the image of my name carved in stone still rose in front of my eyes. I blinked it away, stumbled to my feet and fled.

I locked my front door behind me and collapsed on the sofa, threw my arms over my face and saw no more.

*

The sounds of bells woke me. I was stiff and cold and still wearing sodden boots, coat and gloves. I blinked up at my ceiling, listening to the bells. I got to my feet and stumbled to the window, flung the panes open wide and breathed in the cool, bright air and drank in the sound. Their music cleared my head. My limbs were aching and cold, my hair hung tangled around my shoulders and a glance at my reflection in the window showed my make up in great black streaks down my face but my mind felt more ordered and content than I realised it had felt in a long, long time. I saw clearly. Everything was as bright and clear-cut as the blankets of snow that lay under the bright winter sunshine.

I left the window open and turned and hurried back into the room, reaching for my phone and phone book, hoping my nephew still had the same mobile number and that his theatre company would accept a late donation.

 

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11 Responses to Bleak Midwinter

  1. H. Ken Abell says:

    I thought this is an excellent update of the story. Old Chuck would be proud. Your writing is much more descriptive than I’ve ever been able to manage. It took me A bit before I realized what you were doing, And then I was worried that you were going to stick completely to the text. I was pleasantly surprised by your twist.

    • jcollyer says:

      Aw thanks! I’ve always been a bit worried that this one doesn’t make sense. I’m glad it does! I’ve got a soft spot for this one – wrote it at Christmas time in a rush but it pleased me to do it 🙂 I hope I get a chance to write some more short fiction soon!

  2. Nicely done. You write very well. There were a couple of typos near the top. One was “oppisite” and I can’t recall the other one. And the text at the end is a different size. Other than that, looks great, reads great. 😀
    Almost wish it was Christmas so I could get fully into the spirit.

    • jcollyer says:

      Thanks so much! You’re a legend 😀 Very glad you enjoyed. Yes I wrote this piece in a bit of a rush and never revisited it – I shall do another round of edits, thanks very much for drawing these to my attention 🙂

      If you’re in a Halloweeny mood both Cenwick Priory and Wasteland are ghost stories 😀

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  4. M. C. Dulac says:

    Ooh, I was hooked from the first line! I love when a writer drops the reader right into a scene! It was close to 100 degrees fahrenheit here yesterday, so crisp snowy landscapes are very appealing to me at the moment!

    I had a real chuckle at the guy who shot her a dirty look when he was smoking out side the pub! And I was screaming “don’t go through the cemetery” at the end! But I’m glad she saw the error of her ways in true Christmas story style!

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